英語作文開頭
一般來說應該背一點精彩的句式放在開頭用以吸引閱卷老師的注意力，
讓他對你有一個比較好的第一印象，
在最後結分的時候把你的分數向上靠
（不要小看這一靠，有時候1分就是天壤之別！）
但總體基本以簡單句為主，
不要顯得太過於注重華麗的詞藻，
當然如果你的水平足夠隨意使用復合句的話就沒有這點條條框框，
主要是因為如果你的水平不到家，
容易出現語法或句式的錯誤更加令閱卷老師討厭。
樓上的兄弟說的完全不正確！
英語的作文也是和語文一樣按評分標准打分的，
不是只要語法對就好，
舉一個高考評分標准為例：
1. 本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然後以該檔次 的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最後給分。
3. 詞數少於 80和多於 120的，從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。 6. 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。
7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達，對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分：（0分）
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息：內容太少，無法評判；寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。
可能是你用的開頭是已經用爛的那種啦，
網上找找很多很好的開頭的。。。
『貳』 大學英語作文如何開頭
一、用於駁性和比較性論文
1． In general， I don』t agree with
2． In my opinion， this point of view doesn』t hold water．
3． The chief reason why… is that…
4． There is no true that…
5． It is not true that…
6． It can be easily denied than…
7． We have no reason to believe that…
8． What is more serious is that…
9． But it is pity that…
10． Besides， we should not neglect that…
11． But the problem is not so simple． Therefore…
12． Others may find this to be true， but I believer that…
13． Perhaps I was question why…
14． There is a certain amount of truth in this， but we still have a problem with regard to…
15． Though we are in basic agreement with…，but
16． What seems to be the trouble is…
17． Yet differences will be found， that』s why I feel that…
18． It would be reasonable to take the view that …， but it would be foolish to claim that…
19． There is in fact on reason for us so believe that…
20． What these people fail to consider is that…
21． It is one thing to insist that… ， it is quite another to show that …
22． Wonderful as A is ， however， it has its own disadvantages too．
23． The advantages of B are much greater than A．
24． A』s advantage sounds ridiculous when B』s advantages are taken into consideration．
二、用於描寫圖表和數據
1． It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998．
2． There is an increase of 20% in total this year．
3． It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995．
4． It would be expected to increase 5 times．
5． The table shows a three times increase over that of last year．
6． It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996．
7． The total number was lowered by 10%．
8． It rose from 10－15 percent of the total this year．
9． Compared with 1997， it fell from 15 to 10 percent．
10． The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995．
11． It has decreased almost two and half times， compared with…
三、用於解釋性和闡述性論說文
1． Everybody knows that…
2． It can be easily proved that…
3． It is true that…
4． No one can deny that
5． One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…
6． The chief reason is that…
7． We must recognize that…
8． There is on doubt that…
9． I am of the opinion that…
10． This can be expressed as follows；
11． To take …for an example…
12． We have reason to believe that
13． Now that we know that…
14． Among the most convincing reasons given， one should be mentioned…
15． The change in …largely results from the fact that
16． There are several causes for this significant growth in…，first …，second …，finally…
17． A number of factors could account for the development in…
18． Perhaps the primary reason is…
19． It is chiefly responsible of…
20． The reasons for…are complicated， And probably they are found in the fact…
21． Here are several possible reasons， excerpt that…
22． Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…
23． It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…
24． Different people observes it in different ways．
四、用於文章的開頭
1． As the proverb says…
2． It goes without saying tan…
3． Generally speaking…
4． It is quite clear than because…
5． It is often said that …
6． Many people often ask such question：「…？」
7． More and more people have come to realize…
8． There is no doubt that…
9． Some people believe that…
10． These days we are often told that， but is this really the case?
11． One great man said that…
12． Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention．
13． In the past several years there has been…
14． Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…
15． Currently there is a widespread concern that…
16． Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…
17． There is a general discussion today about the issue of …
18． Faced with…， quite a few people argue that…， but other people conceive differently．
五、用於文章的結尾
1． from this point of view…
2． in a word…
3． in conclusion…
4． on account of this we can find that…
5． the result is dependent on…
6． therefore， these findings reveal the following information：
7． thus， this is the reason why we must…
8． to sum up …
9． as far as…be concerned， I believe that…
10． It is obvious that…
11． There is little doubt that…
12． There is no immediate solution to the problem of …， but …might be helpful
13． None of the solutions is quite satisfactory． The problem should be examined in a new way．
14． It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on…
15． Taking into account all these factors， we may safely reach the conclusion that…
六、用於論證和說明
1． As it is described that…
2． It has been illustrated that…
3． It provides a good example of…
4． We may cite another instance of…
5． History man provides us with the examples of…
6． A number of further facts may be added…
7． The situation is not unique， it is typical of dozens I have heard．
8． A recent investigation indicate that…
9． According to the statistics provided …
10． According to a latest study， it can be predicted…
11． There is no sufficient evidence to show that…
12． All available evidence points to the fact that…
13． Examples given leads me to conclude that…
14． It reveals the unquestionable fact that…
15． The idea may be proved by facts…
16． All the fact s suggest that…
17． No one can deny the fact that…
18． We may face the undeniable fact that…
『叄』 英語作文開頭怎麼寫
一、說明原因型模塊
Currently, XX has been the order of the day. This does demonstrate the theory —— nothing is more valuable than XX It is clear that (1). If you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. On the contrary, if you (3).Failure will be following with you. It turns out that all your plan falls through. No one can deny another fact that (4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).It will exert a profound influence upon (6).With reference to my standpoint, I think (7).
注釋：
1、XX的第一個優點
2、支持XX的做法
3、不支持XX的做法
4、XX的第二個優點
5、舉例證明優點二
6、說明XX優點三的影響
二、說明原因型模塊
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on (1). The factors for (2).First of all, (3).Then, there comes a case that (4). Moreover, (5). Especially when (6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).In this way, we should behave just like (8).
三、說明原因型模塊
For most of us today, (1). From above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.The primary reason, I think, is (3).Second, (4). The third reason, actually, is (5). The significance for (6). Therefore, (7).
注釋：
1、人們針對XX的態度和舉措
2、歸納現狀
3、第一個原因
4、第二個原因
5、第三個原因
6、重申造成現狀的最重要原因
四、說明原因型模塊
These days we often hear that (1).It is common that (2). Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing, (3).For another, (4). What is more, since
(5),it is natural that (6).To solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. We should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and I do believe everything will be better in the future.
注釋：
1、提出論題
2、說明現狀
3、理由一
4、理由二
5、理由三
6、理由三引起的後果
7、解決方法
提綱式作文寫作模板
1、對立觀點式
A. 有人認為X 是好事，贊成X，為什麼？
B. 有人認為X 是壞事，反對X，為什麼？
C. 我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一個原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一個原因。However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反對X 的第一個理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個壞處。
2、批駁觀點式
A．一個錯誤觀點。
B．我不同意。Many people argue that 錯誤觀點。By saying that, they mean 對這個觀點的進一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個錯誤觀點或者受到這個錯誤觀點的影響)。 There might be some element of truth in these people's belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯誤觀點相反的觀點。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。
3、社會問題(現象)式
A．一個社會問題或者現象
B．產生的原因
C．對社會和我們生活的影響
D．如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)
E．前景的預測。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 調查內容說明這種現象的情況。(或者是一個例子)。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 參照辯論式議論文的寫法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 同上Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will……
辯論式議論文模版（一）
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that
觀點1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that
觀點2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,
論據1. More importantly,
論據2. Most important of all,
論據3. In summary, 總結觀點。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或From above, we can predict that 預測。
辯論式議論文模版（二）
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that
觀點1. While others point out that
觀點2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing,
論據1. For another,
論據2. Last but not the least,
論據3. To conclude, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或From above, we can predict that 預測。
辯論式議論文模版（三）
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點)。Some people are of the view that
觀點1. While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that
觀點2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. First of all,
論據1. Furthermore,
論據2. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is,
論據3. A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that 總結觀點。As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心。或 From above, we can predict that 預測。
『肆』 英語作文怎樣寫開頭和結尾
一. 英語作文開頭方式
1、「開門見山」式
一般來說，文章的開頭應盡量做到「開門見山」，即要用簡單明了的語言引出文章的話題，使人一開始就能了解文章要說明的內容。
① 對於敘事類的文章，可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環境交代清楚。如「A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)」的開頭可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 對於論述性的文章，可以在開頭處先闡明自己的觀點，接著展開進一步的論述。如「The Time and the Money (時間和金錢)」 的開頭可以是：Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First, when money is used up, you can earn it back， but……
2、回憶性開頭
二. 英語作文結尾方式
1、自然結尾，點明主題
隨著文章的結束，文章自然而然地結尾。如「Helping the Policeman (幫助警察)」的結尾可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy. 再如「The Tortoise and the Hare(龜兔賽跑)」 的結尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。
『伍』 英語作文開頭，怎麼寫
1．
開頭萬能公式一：名人名言
有人問了，「我沒有記住名言，怎麼辦？尤其是英語名言？」，很好辦：編！
原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒准將來我們就是名人呢！對吧？
經典句型：
a
proberb
says,
「
you
are
only
young
once.」
（適用於已記住的名言）
it
goes
without
saying
that
we
cannot
be
young
forever.
（適用於自編名言）
更多經典句型：as
everyone
knows,
no
one
can
deny
that…
2．
開頭萬能公式二：數字統計
原理：要想更有說服力，就應該用實際的數字來說明。
原則上在議論文當中十不應該出現虛假數字的，可是在考試的時候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：
according
to
a
recent
survey,
about
78.9％
of
the
college
students
wanted
to
further
their
study
after
their
graation.
看起來這個數字文鄒鄒的，其實都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個題目我們都可以這樣編造：
honesty
根據最近的一項統計調查顯荊笱蚶鮮η爰俚睦磧傻敝?8％都是假的。
travel
by
bike
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，85％的人在近距離旅行的時候首選的交通工具是自行車。
youth
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，在某個大學，學生的課余時間的70％都是在休閑娛樂。
five－day
work
week
better
than
six－day
work?
根據最近的一項統計調查顯示，98％的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：
a
recent
statistics
shows
that
…
『陸』 英語作文的好開頭好結尾
英語作文好的開頭和結尾莫過於運用一些美文名言，譬如：1、Failureteachessuccess.成功是失敗之母。
2、Romewasnotbuiltinaday.偉業非一日之功；冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。
3、Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。
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4、Itisnevertoolatetolearn.學習永遠不嫌晚；活到老，學到老。
5、Nopains,nogains.不勞則無獲；一份耕耘，一份收獲。
拿到一篇作文後，第一件事就是要審題。審題就是要審作文的體裁和題材。作文的體裁決定你選用的題材。在動筆之前，應先弄清楚題目提示和要求，包括主要內容、文體時間、地點、人物、字數及要求的人稱等。根據提示信息勾勒出文章的整體框架，確定寫作順序，然後遣詞造句，以便突出主題。最後就是要注意詳略得當。
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『柒』 英語作文開頭部分
一篇文章通常可分為三個部分，即開頭、正文和結尾。這三個部分安排是否得體，直接影響到文章的質量。
文章的開頭一般來說應盡量做到開門見山，用簡單明白的敘述引出文章的話題，使讀者了解文章要談論什麼，一下於引起讀者的興趣。
作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種：
1．開門見山，揭示主題
文章一開頭，，就交待清楚文章的主題是什麼。如「How I Spent My Vacation」(我怎樣度假)的開頭是：
I Spent my last vacation happily．
下面是題為"Honesty"(談誠實)一文中的開頭：
Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar"，and is looked upon by honest people．
2．交代人物、事情、時間或環境開頭
在文章的開頭，先把人物、事件和環境交待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅遊)的開頭：
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
3. 回憶性的開頭
用回憶的方法來開頭。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的開頭是：
I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4．概括性的開頭
即對要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個概括性的介紹。如「The Happiness of Reading Books」(讀書的快樂)的開頭：
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5．介紹環境式的開頭
即開頭利用自然景物或自然環境引出要介紹的事物。如「An Accident」(一場事故)的開頭是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
6．交待寫作目的的開頭。
在文章的一開頭就交待寫作目的，如通過文章要表揚誰，批評誰，或說明一個什麼問題等。如 "Pollution Control" (控制污染)的開頭：
In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
『捌』 英語作文開頭語句
1.至今...被認為是...
2.不用說...(意思是：論述的內容是顯而易見的）
eg.It goes without saying that work without rest will do harm to health. 不需說，工作而不休息會對健康有害的。
3.不用說...；...是肯定的。
4.有句諺語是這樣說的...;常言道...
5.必須引起注意的是...
6.通常認為...
7.很可能...
8.hardly表否定，...不被經常說起；我們很少談到...
9.需要引起特別注意的是...
10.事實不容否認...
11.沒有比這更重要的是...
12.意思同上，更重要的是...