英語6級作文

㈠ 6級英語作文求高手修改和大概分數

水平有限，只能改改病句，還沒達到打分的水平，望理解。話說沒看到你的作文啊~

㈡ 英語六級作文怎麼准備

閱卷老師在語言方面主要從兩個方面進行評判：
1、基本正確
四、六級考生的最大問題不是寫得太簡單,而是嚴重錯誤太多.基礎一般的同學即使使用小學或中學詞彙和句型,只要使用得基本正確,也可以得到及格分數.考生最常犯的語言錯誤有三類：語法、拼寫、標點.最常犯的語法錯誤包括：時態、冠詞、主謂一致、名詞單復數等.
2、豐富多變
基礎較好的同學,要想取得四、六級寫作高分,應做到豐富多變.豐富多變體現在詞彙和句型兩方面.同一詞語在一句話、一個段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重復出現,應盡量使用同、近義詞替換（無法替換的關鍵詞除外）.例如：think可以替換為reckon,assume,argue等詞.如果想不到同、近義詞,可以使用上義詞進行替換.此外,句型也應富於變化,不要拘泥於主謂賓句型,可以使用主系表、過去分詞和現在分詞短 語作狀語、不定式短語作狀語、狀語從句等多種句型.
四級作文如果量化成句數,只需寫10句左右；六級只需12句左右.全文應以短句為主,長短句相結合.所謂短句是指10個詞左右的句子,不能全篇都是5、6個詞的短句.同時,全文應有一定數量的長句,一般15~20詞即可,太長則易冗贅.有的同學以為只寫長句不寫短句,就能取得高分,實際上老師看長句會覺得很累,以為你不會寫短句,通常不會給高分.如果一篇中文作文每句都30多個字,定然晦澀難懂,英文也不例外.精煉的短句可以放在段首表示強調； 復雜的長句可以進行具體的論證、舉例或描述.
高分真經
（一）背誦
背誦是提高英語(論壇)(論壇)綜合能力的法寶,可分為以下5個層次：（1）精彩詞彙；（2）精彩句型；（3）精彩句子；（4）萬能框架；（5）經典範文.注意句子和句型不一樣,精彩句子應作為單詞來記憶.背誦前,確保自己已充分理解所有內容.
語言學習有兩個關鍵詞--輸入（INPUT）和輸出（OUTPUT）.聽力和閱讀屬於輸入,考生處於被動狀態,只需在考場上將聽到和看到的東西 弄懂.應對這種題目的技巧很多,容易在短期內提高.但口語和寫作屬於輸出,考生必須變被動為主動,這很難在短期內突破.沒有大量的輸入,很難進行自由輸出.
四、六級寫作需要在30分鍾內完成一篇短文,共計120或150餘字,很多同學叫苦不迭.但若將其改。

㈢ 英語6級範文

歷年真題的卷子上的範文不錯，雖然寫的不一定好，但是那些文章比較吸引閱卷老師的眼球，照那樣的文章寫很容易得高分。

㈣ 跪求英語6級作文模板。（100分）

Global Shortage of Fresh Water

1. 人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水……）
2. 實際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增長、工業用水增加、污染……）
3. 我們應該怎麼辦

【範文】
At present, many people take it for granted that fresh water will never be used up because we can find it not only from the rain, but also in the rivers, lakes and wells. Consequently, it is not necessary for us to worry about global shortage of fresh water.

In fact, the situation has become so serious that everyone should be aware of it and take immediate actions. With the world population increasing rapidly year after year, water resources are being consumed at an appalling speed. What's more, with the development of science and technology, modern instry needs much more water than before. Thirdly, pollution is also a worrying problem—water in rivers and wells becomes undrinkable because of instrial wastes.

We should take urgent measures to protect fresh water resources. The government should increase the efficiency of water usage by such methods as water recycling and purification of sea water. The people, on the other hand, should form the habit of cherishing every drop of water. Last but not least, pollution must be effectively controlled, if we ever want to improve the quality of life.

【點評】
本篇範文的最大特色是將批駁類與辦法類結合，首段指出一些人的錯誤認識；第二段從三方面進行批駁；第三段指出我們的做法。
範文首先指出，一些人認為淡水是取之不盡的，然後在第二段中進行批駁。首先，水資源正在被以驚人的速度消費。其次，現代工業需要更多的水資源。另外，因為工業污染，有些水已經不適宜飲用了。第三段闡述正確做法，即政府提高水資源的利用率、人人養成節約用水的習慣以及有效地控制水污染。
第一段第一句中的take it for granted表示「想當然」，be used up表示「用完，耗盡」。第三段第一點中的efficiency，recycling和purification分別指「效率」、「再循環」和「凈化」。
預測作文（二）
Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?

1. 近年來越來越多的民工湧入大城市
2. 產生這一社會現象的原因

【範文】
For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who flood into big cities. Many men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city dwellers. Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.

First and foremost, the limited land can no longer proce enough crops for an ever-increasing rural population. In the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard work. Last but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good ecation.

I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.

【點評】
本題談論的是一種社會現象。第一段首句引入某一現象，第二句舉例說明，第三句是個過渡句，引起下面解釋原因段落的第二段；第三段是簡潔的結束語，其中的賓語從句嵌套一個狀語從句。
範文首先指出大量農民工湧入大城市這一現象，並引出第二段所闡述的三個原因。首先，農村有限的土地不能滿足日益增長的人口消費。其次，大城市有更多的工作機會。最後，農民工嚮往大城市的生活，想永遠居住在大城市。末段總結指出，如果創造一個健康的社會環境，農民工就可以為國家做出更大的貢獻。
第一段第二句中的construction site表示「建築工地」，babysitter表示「幫人看孩子的人」。第二段第一點中的rural指「農村的」；第三點中的permanently和admire分別指「永久地」和「羨慕」，receive ecation指「接受教育」。
預測作文（三）
Silence Is Gold

1. 許多場合中「沉默是金」是正確的
2. 但也有例外的情形
3. 結論

【範文】
When we talk of the famous proverb "Silence is Gold", we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.

This proverb is especially true under several situations. First, if we have made a promise not to let out a secret, we should always keep silent. Second, we should avoid talking over facts or statistics of which we are not sure. Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.

Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions. If we find out a flaw in other's speaking or writing, we should not hesitate a moment to point it out. And to friends or acquaintances seeking advice, we should feel free to help them.

In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases "silence is gold", but in certain circumstances, talking is the right choice.

【點評】
本文的特色在於其並未完全肯定或完全否定所提到的諺語，而是從正、反兩個方面去分析，即第二段指出其正確性，第三段談例外情況；末段總結，呼應全文。
範文首先提出所要討論的諺語「沉默是金」。第二段分三個方面闡述其正確性，即發誓保守秘密，對於不確定的事情要保持沉默，而在表達自己的思想時，力求簡潔。第三段指出例外，為別人指出錯誤或為朋友等提建議時，不要堅持「沉默是金」。末段總結，呼應第二、三段。
第一段中的label...as...表示「將……看作……」，而explore... in depth表示「深入探究……」。第二段第一點中的make a promise表示「允諾」，let out a secret表示「泄露秘密」，keep silent表示「保持沉默」；第三點中的brevity is the soul of wit也是個諺語，表示「言貴簡潔」。第三段第二點中的acquaintance指「熟人」。

預測作文（四）
A Letter of Application

1. 表達自己對該工作的渴求態度
2. 盡量展示自己的技能和經歷
3. 信中應包括自己的聯系方式

【範文】
January , 2010
Dear Sirs,

I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday's China Daily for, as is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallel your requirement.
I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry. I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them e to my hard work. I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities. In the e process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.
I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 64543575 for further information. Thank you for your favorable consideration.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,
Jenny Green

【點評】
這篇文章是一篇非常成功的求職信。首段表明了自己對經理助理這一職位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知這一職位的，而後說明自己的條件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，說明自己在專業上是個尖子生，並指出對於其他課程自己做得同樣出色，為將來的工作奠定了堅實的基礎；後兩句說明自己參加了各種學校活動，培養了多方面的能力。第三段首句說明自己非常希望能早日獲得面試的機會；次句說如果對方太忙，可以打電話聯系；末句對對方表示感謝，是一句客套話。
首段中的keen表示「熱切的」， parallel這里做動詞，表示「與……相當，比得上」。第二段首句中的specialized area表示「專業領域」；第二句中的excel是不及物動詞，表示「突出，超常，勝過他人」；第三句中的edge表示「優勢」；第四句中的a variety of等於various,表示「多種多樣的」；第五句中的teamwork spirit表示「團隊精神」，interpersonal skills表示「人際交往的能力」。

1. 上圖所示為2001年7月、2002年7月、2003年1月我國上網用戶總人數，請描述其變化；
2. 請說明發生這些變化的原因；
3．你認為目前用戶在網際網路使用中有什麼困難或問題。

【範文】
From the chart we can see clearly that the number of Internet surfers in our country has increased from 26.5 million in July 2001 to 45.8 million in July 2002, and then to 59.1 million in January 2003.

In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows. First, the Internet can help us accomplish many tasks, including both work and play—searching for information has become more convenient than ever, and safe online business is no longer a dream. Besides, surfing the Internet is becoming cheaper and cheaper—more and more people can afford it.

The negative effects of the Internet are also clear. To begin with, sitting too long before the computers is harmful to our body, especially our eyes. Second, more and more people become inlged in playing video games or chatting online, which are time-consuming.

All in all, I should say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to enhance both work and study.

【點評】
首段敘述從2001年至2003年我國上網用戶總人數的變化趨勢。第二段分兩方面給出其中的原因：首先是網際網路方便快捷、作用巨大；其次是費用降低。第三段分兩個方面指出面臨的困難和問題：首先是上網時間過長有害健康；其次是有些人上網玩游戲、聊天，這都是不好的習慣。第四段做總結：第一句指出利大於弊；第二句說關鍵在於好好利用網際網路。
第二段首句中的in my mind意思是「依我看，在我看來」；第三段中的be harmful to意為「對……有傷害」，become inlged in意思是「沉迷於」，time-consuming是「浪費時間」的意思；最後一段首句中的outweigh意為「比……重要」。

㈤ 英語作文6級滿分是多少

大學英語六級作文總分回106分
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㈥ 英語6級作文能用到哪些名言警句

1. A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near. 海內存知己，天涯若比鄰。
2. A common danger causes common action. 同舟共濟。
3. A contented mind is a continual / perpetual feast. 知足常樂。
4. A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長一智。
5. A guest should suit the convenience of the host. 客隨主便。
6. A letter from home is a priceless treasure. 家書抵萬金。
7. All rivers run into the sea. 殊途同歸。
8. All time is no time when it is past. 機不可失，時不再來。
9. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一日一個蘋果，身體健康不求醫。
10. As heroes think, so thought Bruce. 英雄所見略同。
11. A young idler, an old beggar. 少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。
12. Behind the mountains there are people to be found. 天外有天，山外有山。
13. Bad luck often brings good luck. 塞翁失馬，安知非福。
14. Bread is the stall of life. 麵包是生命的支柱。(民以食為天。)
15. Business is business. 公事公辦。
16. Clumsy birds have to start flying early. 笨鳥先飛。
17. Courtesy costs nothing. 禮多人不怪。
18. Custom makes all things easy. 習慣成自然。
19. Desire has no rest. 人的慾望無止境。
20. Difficult the first time, easy the second. 一回生，二回熟。

㈦ 英語6級作文模板

模版1

some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 觀點1. but other people take an opposite side. they firmly believe that 觀點2. as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea.
there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. first of all, 論據1.
more importantly, 論據2.
most important of all, 論據3.
in summary, 總結觀點. as a college student, i am supposed to 表決心.
或 from above, we can predict that 預測.

模版2

people hold different views about x. some people are of the opinion that 觀點1, while others point out that 觀點2. as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
for one thing, 論據1.
for another, 論據2.
last but not the least, 論據3.
to conclude, 總結觀點. as a college student, i am supposed to 表決心.
或 from above, we can predict that 預測.

模版3
there is no consensus of opinions among people about x（爭論的焦點）。some people are of the view that 觀點1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. the reasons are obvious.
first of all, 論據1。
furthermore, 論據2。
among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. that is, 論據3。
a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結觀點。
as a college student, i am supposed to 表決心.
或 from above, we can predict that 預測.

1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties. 3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.

11.表示結論 1)In short，it can be said that... 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ...

12.套語 1)It』s well known to us that ... 2)As is known to us，... 3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that ... 5)As aproverb says，「Where there is a will，there is a way.

)開篇

1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...

2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.

3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.

4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...

5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...

6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.

7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...

8) According to a recent survey, ...

9) With the rapid development of ..., ...

八)結尾

1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...

2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...

3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...

4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...

5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.

6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...

7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.

8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.

9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...

10) Taking all these into account, we ...

11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...

二、用於描寫圖表和數據

1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.

2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year.

3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995.

4. It would be expected to increase 5 times.

5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.

6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.

7. The total number was lowered by 10%.

8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year.

9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent.

10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.

11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with…

三、用於解釋性和闡述性論說文

1.Everybody knows that…

2.It can be easily proved that…

3. It is true that…

4. No one can deny that

5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…

6. The chief reason is that…

7. We must recognize that…

8. There is on doubt that…

9. I am of the opinion that…

10. This can be expressed as follows;

11. To take …for an example…

12. We have reason to believe that

13. Now that we know that…

14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned…

15. The change in …largely results from the fact that

16. There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…

17. A number of factors could account for the development in…

18. Perhaps the primary reason is…

19. It is chiefly responsible of…

20. The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact…

21. Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that…

22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…

23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…

24. Different people observes it in different ways.

四、用於文章的開頭

1. As the proverb says…

2. It goes without saying tan…

3. Generally speaking…

4. It is quite clear than because…

5. It is often said that …

6. Many people often ask such question:「…？」

7. More and more people have come to realize…

8. There is no doubt that…

9. Some people believe that…

10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?

11. One great man said that…

12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention.

13. In the past several years there has been…

14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…

15. Currently there is a widespread concern that…

16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…

17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of …

18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.

五、用於文章的結尾

1. from this point of view…

2. in a word…

3. in conclusion…

4. on account of this we can find that…

5. the result is dependent on…

6. therefore, these findings reveal the following information:

7. thus, this is the reason why we must…

8. to sum up …

9. as far as…be concerned, I believe that…

10. It is obvious that…

11. There is little doubt that…

12. There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful

13. None of the solutions is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

14. It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on…

15. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclustion that…

●過渡性句型：

1) this is true that...

2) This is true, no doubt, but... 3) ...also...

4) It is one thing to...; it is another to...

●描寫圖表和數據的句型

1) .. . rank first (both) in...

2) .. .in proportion to...

3) A is by far the largest...

4) As many as....

5) The number is ...times as much as that of ...

6) The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year.

7) It accounts for 35% of...

8) By comparison with ..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to...

9) ...rise rapidly(slowly) 10) ...remain level...

11) ...reach ... 12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise/increase demand./income./population./prices./proction./decrease/decline/rection/fall/drop in

13) be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline (……在不斷的增加,減少,上升,下降)

●圖表作文中的過渡、概括句型：

1) As can be indicated in the table, ...

2) As we could find out later， ...

3) As is revealed in the table，...

4) As the survey results show，...

5) This table provides several important points of comparison

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㈧ 大家幫我寫一篇6級的英語作文。在150字左右

It is often debated that whether a name is important or not. Some persons consider that they have a good name and their name are very important for the following reasons.

First, a good name is representative of expectations from your parents. For instance, one Chinese』s parents may hope he have a very happy life in the future if they named he 「lele」.Second, They claim that a good name， or a name that can be easily remembered， can bring one a lot more opportunities than others．Third, just as the old saying goes: a thing is the entity of a name.We are humans and we are so different with those inanimate objects .Therefore name is certainly significant for us.

However people have diverse opinions on the importance of a name. To begin with,name is only a code,and we can call anything with the same name if we want.And as it is known to us,in china,there are so many people with the same name,so we need not take our name too serious.In addition,there is no necessary connection between one』s name and his personality.For example,a man named 『Jun』 which means emperor or ambition may prefer a peace life.

In my opinion, I think name is very important in our daily life because it is the symbol distinguishes one thing or person from the others. After all,the first thing that people learn about a person is usually his name,and a name that sounds beautiful may give and leave people a great first impression.. On the other hand， we should not exaggerate the effect of a name on a person』s fate．.For a bright future,we need intelligence,honesty,sincerity and efforts more than just a beautiful name.