英语6级作文

㈠ 6级英语作文求高手修改和大概分数

水平有限，只能改改病句，还没达到打分的水平，望理解。话说没看到你的作文啊~

㈡ 英语六级作文怎么准备

阅卷老师在语言方面主要从两个方面进行评判：
1、基本正确
四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单,而是严重错误太多.基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型,只要使用得基本正确,也可以得到及格分数.考生最常犯的语言错误有三类：语法、拼写、标点.最常犯的语法错误包括：时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等.
2、丰富多变
基础较好的同学,要想取得四、六级写作高分,应做到丰富多变.丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面.同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好 不要重复出现,应尽量使用同、近义词替换（无法替换的关键词除外）.例如：think可以替换为reckon,assume,argue等词.如果想不到同、近义词,可以使用上义词进行替换.此外,句型也应富于变化,不要拘泥于主谓宾句型,可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短 语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型.
四级作文如果量化成句数,只需写10句左右；六级只需12句左右.全文应以短句为主,长短句相结合.所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子,不能全篇都是5、6个词的短句.同时,全文应有一定数量的长句,一般15~20词即可,太长则易冗赘.有的同学以为只写长句不写短句,就能取得高分,实际上老师看长句会觉得很累,以为你不会写短句,通常不会给高分.如果一篇中文作文每句都30多个字,定然晦涩难懂,英文也不例外.精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调； 复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述.
高分真经
（一）背诵
背诵是提高英语(论坛)(论坛)综合能力的法宝,可分为以下5个层次：（1）精彩词汇；（2）精彩句型；（3）精彩句子；（4）万能框架；（5）经典范文.注意句子和句型不一样,精彩句子应作为单词来记忆.背诵前,确保自己已充分理解所有内容.
语言学习有两个关键词--输入（INPUT）和输出（OUTPUT）.听力和阅读属于输入,考生处于被动状态,只需在考场上将听到和看到的东西 弄懂.应对这种题目的技巧很多,容易在短期内提高.但口语和写作属于输出,考生必须变被动为主动,这很难在短期内突破.没有大量的输入,很难进行自由输出.
四、六级写作需要在30分钟内完成一篇短文,共计120或150余字,很多同学叫苦不迭.但若将其改。

㈢ 英语6级范文

历年真题的卷子上的范文不错，虽然写的不一定好，但是那些文章比较吸引阅卷老师的眼球，照那样的文章写很容易得高分。

㈣ 跪求英语6级作文模板。（100分）

Global Shortage of Fresh Water

1. 人们以为淡水是取之不尽的（提示：雨水、河水、井水……）
2. 实际上淡水是非常紧缺的（提示：人口增长、工业用水增加、污染……）
3. 我们应该怎么办

【范文】
At present, many people take it for granted that fresh water will never be used up because we can find it not only from the rain, but also in the rivers, lakes and wells. Consequently, it is not necessary for us to worry about global shortage of fresh water.

In fact, the situation has become so serious that everyone should be aware of it and take immediate actions. With the world population increasing rapidly year after year, water resources are being consumed at an appalling speed. What's more, with the development of science and technology, modern instry needs much more water than before. Thirdly, pollution is also a worrying problem—water in rivers and wells becomes undrinkable because of instrial wastes.

We should take urgent measures to protect fresh water resources. The government should increase the efficiency of water usage by such methods as water recycling and purification of sea water. The people, on the other hand, should form the habit of cherishing every drop of water. Last but not least, pollution must be effectively controlled, if we ever want to improve the quality of life.

【点评】
本篇范文的最大特色是将批驳类与办法类结合，首段指出一些人的错误认识；第二段从三方面进行批驳；第三段指出我们的做法。
范文首先指出，一些人认为淡水是取之不尽的，然后在第二段中进行批驳。首先，水资源正在被以惊人的速度消费。其次，现代工业需要更多的水资源。另外，因为工业污染，有些水已经不适宜饮用了。第三段阐述正确做法，即政府提高水资源的利用率、人人养成节约用水的习惯以及有效地控制水污染。
第一段第一句中的take it for granted表示“想当然”，be used up表示“用完，耗尽”。第三段第一点中的efficiency，recycling和purification分别指“效率”、“再循环”和“净化”。
预测作文（二）
Why Are There So Many Rural Laborers in Big Cities?

1. 近年来越来越多的民工涌入大城市
2. 产生这一社会现象的原因

【范文】
For a number of years, there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who flood into big cities. Many men work on construction sites, while many women work as dishwashers in restaurants or babysitters for city dwellers. Three reasons, in my mind, can account for this social phenomenon.

First and foremost, the limited land can no longer proce enough crops for an ever-increasing rural population. In the second place, there are far more opportunities in big cities—rural laborers dream of earning money through hard work. Last but by no means least, many of them want to live permanently in big cities, because they admire the way of living there, and wish their children to receive good ecation.

I firmly believe that if we try our best to create a healthy social atmosphere, rural laborers will make greater contribution to our nation.

【点评】
本题谈论的是一种社会现象。第一段首句引入某一现象，第二句举例说明，第三句是个过渡句，引起下面解释原因段落的第二段；第三段是简洁的结束语，其中的宾语从句嵌套一个状语从句。
范文首先指出大量农民工涌入大城市这一现象，并引出第二段所阐述的三个原因。首先，农村有限的土地不能满足日益增长的人口消费。其次，大城市有更多的工作机会。最后，农民工向往大城市的生活，想永远居住在大城市。末段总结指出，如果创造一个健康的社会环境，农民工就可以为国家做出更大的贡献。
第一段第二句中的construction site表示“建筑工地”，babysitter表示“帮人看孩子的人”。第二段第一点中的rural指“农村的”；第三点中的permanently和admire分别指“永久地”和“羡慕”，receive ecation指“接受教育”。
预测作文（三）
Silence Is Gold

1. 许多场合中“沉默是金”是正确的
2. 但也有例外的情形
3. 结论

【范文】
When we talk of the famous proverb "Silence is Gold", we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.

This proverb is especially true under several situations. First, if we have made a promise not to let out a secret, we should always keep silent. Second, we should avoid talking over facts or statistics of which we are not sure. Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.

Nevertheless, there are also some exceptions. If we find out a flaw in other's speaking or writing, we should not hesitate a moment to point it out. And to friends or acquaintances seeking advice, we should feel free to help them.

In a word, we can draw the conclusion that in most cases "silence is gold", but in certain circumstances, talking is the right choice.

【点评】
本文的特色在于其并未完全肯定或完全否定所提到的谚语，而是从正、反两个方面去分析，即第二段指出其正确性，第三段谈例外情况；末段总结，呼应全文。
范文首先提出所要讨论的谚语“沉默是金”。第二段分三个方面阐述其正确性，即发誓保守秘密，对于不确定的事情要保持沉默，而在表达自己的思想时，力求简洁。第三段指出例外，为别人指出错误或为朋友等提建议时，不要坚持“沉默是金”。末段总结，呼应第二、三段。
第一段中的label...as...表示“将……看作……”，而explore... in depth表示“深入探究……”。第二段第一点中的make a promise表示“允诺”，let out a secret表示“泄露秘密”，keep silent表示“保持沉默”；第三点中的brevity is the soul of wit也是个谚语，表示“言贵简洁”。第三段第二点中的acquaintance指“熟人”。

预测作文（四）
A Letter of Application

1. 表达自己对该工作的渴求态度
2. 尽量展示自己的技能和经历
3. 信中应包括自己的联系方式

【范文】
January , 2010
Dear Sirs,

I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post of assistant manager which you advertised in yesterday's China Daily for, as is indicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallel your requirement.
I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry. I took several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them e to my hard work. I am sure such courses as British and American literature and culture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fierce competition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to is that I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities. In the e process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.
I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss the possibility of working with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days, you can contact me at 64543575 for further information. Thank you for your favorable consideration.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,
Jenny Green

【点评】
这篇文章是一篇非常成功的求职信。首段表明了自己对经理助理这一职位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知这一职位的，而后说明自己的条件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，说明自己在专业上是个尖子生，并指出对于其他课程自己做得同样出色，为将来的工作奠定了坚实的基础；后两句说明自己参加了各种学校活动，培养了多方面的能力。第三段首句说明自己非常希望能早日获得面试的机会；次句说如果对方太忙，可以打电话联系；末句对对方表示感谢，是一句客套话。
首段中的keen表示“热切的”， parallel这里做动词，表示“与……相当，比得上”。第二段首句中的specialized area表示“专业领域”；第二句中的excel是不及物动词，表示“突出，超常，胜过他人”；第三句中的edge表示“优势”；第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多种多样的”；第五句中的teamwork spirit表示“团队精神”，interpersonal skills表示“人际交往的能力”。

1. 上图所示为2001年7月、2002年7月、2003年1月我国上网用户总人数，请描述其变化；
2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因；
3．你认为目前用户在因特网使用中有什么困难或问题。

【范文】
From the chart we can see clearly that the number of Internet surfers in our country has increased from 26.5 million in July 2001 to 45.8 million in July 2002, and then to 59.1 million in January 2003.

In my mind, the reasons why the Internet surfers are on the rise are as follows. First, the Internet can help us accomplish many tasks, including both work and play—searching for information has become more convenient than ever, and safe online business is no longer a dream. Besides, surfing the Internet is becoming cheaper and cheaper—more and more people can afford it.

The negative effects of the Internet are also clear. To begin with, sitting too long before the computers is harmful to our body, especially our eyes. Second, more and more people become inlged in playing video games or chatting online, which are time-consuming.

All in all, I should say the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. The key lies in whether we can make good use of it to enhance both work and study.

【点评】
首段叙述从2001年至2003年我国上网用户总人数的变化趋势。第二段分两方面给出其中的原因：首先是因特网方便快捷、作用巨大；其次是费用降低。第三段分两个方面指出面临的困难和问题：首先是上网时间过长有害健康；其次是有些人上网玩游戏、聊天，这都是不好的习惯。第四段做总结：第一句指出利大于弊；第二句说关键在于好好利用因特网。
第二段首句中的in my mind意思是“依我看，在我看来”；第三段中的be harmful to意为“对……有伤害”，become inlged in意思是“沉迷于”，time-consuming是“浪费时间”的意思；最后一段首句中的outweigh意为“比……重要”。

㈤ 英语作文6级满分是多少

大学英语六级作文总分回106分
参考答http://www.e.cn/20060808/3202837.shtml

㈥ 英语6级作文能用到哪些名言警句

1. A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near. 海内存知己，天涯若比邻。
2. A common danger causes common action. 同舟共济。
3. A contented mind is a continual / perpetual feast. 知足常乐。
4. A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
5. A guest should suit the convenience of the host. 客随主便。
6. A letter from home is a priceless treasure. 家书抵万金。
7. All rivers run into the sea. 殊途同归。
8. All time is no time when it is past. 机不可失，时不再来。
9. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一日一个苹果，身体健康不求医。
10. As heroes think, so thought Bruce. 英雄所见略同。
11. A young idler, an old beggar. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
12. Behind the mountains there are people to be found. 天外有天，山外有山。
13. Bad luck often brings good luck. 塞翁失马，安知非福。
14. Bread is the stall of life. 面包是生命的支柱。(民以食为天。)
15. Business is business. 公事公办。
16. Clumsy birds have to start flying early. 笨鸟先飞。
17. Courtesy costs nothing. 礼多人不怪。
18. Custom makes all things easy. 习惯成自然。
19. Desire has no rest. 人的欲望无止境。
20. Difficult the first time, easy the second. 一回生，二回熟。

㈦ 英语6级作文模板

模版1

some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. but other people take an opposite side. they firmly believe that 观点2. as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea.
there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. first of all, 论据1.
more importantly, 论据2.
most important of all, 论据3.
in summary, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.
或 from above, we can predict that 预测.

模版2

people hold different views about x. some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
for one thing, 论据1.
for another, 论据2.
last but not the least, 论据3.
to conclude, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.
或 from above, we can predict that 预测.

模版3
there is no consensus of opinions among people about x（争论的焦点）。some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. the reasons are obvious.
first of all, 论据1。
furthermore, 论据2。
among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. that is, 论据3。
a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.
或 from above, we can predict that 预测.

1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcome(con quer)the difficulties. 3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.

11.表示结论 1)In short，it can be said that... 2)It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3)From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ...

12.套语 1)It’s well known to us that ... 2)As is known to us，... 3)This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4)From the graph(table，chart)listed above，it can be seen that ... 5)As aproverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way.

)开篇

1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...

2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.

3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.

4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...

5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...

6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.

7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...

8) According to a recent survey, ...

9) With the rapid development of ..., ...

八)结尾

1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...

2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...

3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...

4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...

5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.

6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...

7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.

8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.

9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...

10) Taking all these into account, we ...

11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...

二、用于描写图表和数据

1. It has increased by three times as compared with that of 1998.

2. There is an increase of 20% in total this year.

3. It has been increased by a factor of 4since 1995.

4. It would be expected to increase 5 times.

5. The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.

6. It was decreased twice than that of the year 1996.

7. The total number was lowered by 10%.

8. It rose from 10-15 percent of the total this year.

9. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15 to 10 percent.

10. The number is 5 times as much as that of 1995.

11. It has decreased almost two and half times, compared with…

三、用于解释性和阐述性论说文

1.Everybody knows that…

2.It can be easily proved that…

3. It is true that…

4. No one can deny that

5. One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is…

6. The chief reason is that…

7. We must recognize that…

8. There is on doubt that…

9. I am of the opinion that…

10. This can be expressed as follows;

11. To take …for an example…

12. We have reason to believe that

13. Now that we know that…

14. Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned…

15. The change in …largely results from the fact that

16. There are several causes for this significant growth in…,first …,second …,finally…

17. A number of factors could account for the development in…

18. Perhaps the primary reason is…

19. It is chiefly responsible of…

20. The reasons for…are complicated, And probably they are found in the fact…

21. Here are several possible reasons, excerpt that…

22. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…

23. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…

24. Different people observes it in different ways.

四、用于文章的开头

1. As the proverb says…

2. It goes without saying tan…

3. Generally speaking…

4. It is quite clear than because…

5. It is often said that …

6. Many people often ask such question:“…？”

7. More and more people have come to realize…

8. There is no doubt that…

9. Some people believe that…

10. These days we are often told that, but is this really the case?

11. One great man said that…

12. Recently the issue of… has been brought to public attention.

13. In the past several years there has been…

14. Now it is commonly held that… but I doubt whether…

15. Currently there is a widespread concern that…

16. Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…

17. There is a general discussion today about the issue of …

18. Faced with…, quite a few people argue that…, but other people conceive differently.

五、用于文章的结尾

1. from this point of view…

2. in a word…

3. in conclusion…

4. on account of this we can find that…

5. the result is dependent on…

6. therefore, these findings reveal the following information:

7. thus, this is the reason why we must…

8. to sum up …

9. as far as…be concerned, I believe that…

10. It is obvious that…

11. There is little doubt that…

12. There is no immediate solution to the problem of …, but …might be helpful

13. None of the solutions is quite satisfactory. The problem should be examined in a new way.

14. It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on…

15. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclustion that…

●过渡性句型：

1) this is true that...

2) This is true, no doubt, but... 3) ...also...

4) It is one thing to...; it is another to...

●描写图表和数据的句型

1) .. . rank first (both) in...

2) .. .in proportion to...

3) A is by far the largest...

4) As many as....

5) The number is ...times as much as that of ...

6) The figure has nearly doubled/tripled, as against that of last year.

7) It accounts for 35% of...

8) By comparison with ..., it decreased/increased/fell from...to...

9) ...rise rapidly(slowly) 10) ...remain level...

11) ...reach ... 12)There is a slight/slow/steady/rapid rise/increase demand./income./population./prices./proction./decrease/decline/rection/fall/drop in

13) be on the increase/decrease/rise/decline (……在不断的增加,减少,上升,下降)

●图表作文中的过渡、概括句型：

1) As can be indicated in the table, ...

2) As we could find out later， ...

3) As is revealed in the table，...

4) As the survey results show，...

5) This table provides several important points of comparison

between，... 6) The two graphs depict the same thing in ... 7) The key findings taken from the surveys are as follows: 8) According to the figures given in the table, ...

9) This chart shows that ...

10) As is shown by the graph, ..
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㈧ 大家帮我写一篇6级的英语作文。在150字左右

It is often debated that whether a name is important or not. Some persons consider that they have a good name and their name are very important for the following reasons.

First, a good name is representative of expectations from your parents. For instance, one Chinese’s parents may hope he have a very happy life in the future if they named he “lele”.Second, They claim that a good name， or a name that can be easily remembered， can bring one a lot more opportunities than others．Third, just as the old saying goes: a thing is the entity of a name.We are humans and we are so different with those inanimate objects .Therefore name is certainly significant for us.

However people have diverse opinions on the importance of a name. To begin with,name is only a code,and we can call anything with the same name if we want.And as it is known to us,in china,there are so many people with the same name,so we need not take our name too serious.In addition,there is no necessary connection between one’s name and his personality.For example,a man named ‘Jun’ which means emperor or ambition may prefer a peace life.

In my opinion, I think name is very important in our daily life because it is the symbol distinguishes one thing or person from the others. After all,the first thing that people learn about a person is usually his name,and a name that sounds beautiful may give and leave people a great first impression.. On the other hand， we should not exaggerate the effect of a name on a person’s fate．.For a bright future,we need intelligence,honesty,sincerity and efforts more than just a beautiful name.